- Title: Angel of White
- Artist: Alyx Xyon
- Description: Constructive criticism please! This is my first time posting an avatar.
- Date: 06/09/2012
- Tags: angel white
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- Pilotslover - 06/13/2012
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I would recommend spending some time in the avatar talk, you can get tips there on how to construct a strong avatar.
This is very plain and doesn't feature any real cohesion; the fluff on her head looks out of place, the Inari's just look out of place and the colours in her outfit don't really match.
Good luck in the future. - Report As Spam