- Title: luna
- Artist: MadamJedi
- Description: This is Luna she is a neko who lost the love of her life on valentines day. she went mad and clawed her own eyes out forcing herself to only remember when they were together, everyday she cried thinking of the things she missed of him...one day she drank poison to kill herself...but sadly her body was almost immune...she can never die she will suffer forever missing him everyday....
- Date: 06/03/2011
- Tags: luna
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Comments (4 Comments)
- MadamJedi - 06/12/2011
- thank you for your critiques...i will take from them what i can and learn. thank you smile
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- tis i the frenchiest fry - 06/11/2011
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hmm...i think it's pretty good smile maybe you could have gone for less bright skin. and scrap the random cape. but i love the balance of everything smile and it's quite unique. Just try for a more engaging description; you don't have to describe every single item razz and the title could have matched better...BUT it's good anyways smile
good try, good try - Report As Spam
- BalancedCuppycake - 06/10/2011
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Creativity: 5/5
Originality: 4/5
Detail: 5/5
Overall: 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Farrago - 06/08/2011
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That is one heck of a run-on sentence.
Maybe you could have named her something else. "Luna" implies a moon theme, and as far as I can tell, this doesn't have anything to do with the moon. - Report As Spam
