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- Title: The Spirit Keeper
- Artist: Reoccurring
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Description:
The keeper of spirits, the guardian of souls,
carries a burden that nobody knows.
To protect a treasure, the crafters of light.
The keeper defends them with all of his might.
If left unguarded, the spirits, surely would fall;
They depend on their keeper, and heed to his call.
When the keeper is threatened, they are beckoned by charm,
and the spirits, in turn, shield their keeper from harm. - Date: 04/28/2011
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Aegis - 05/09/2011
- The poem was nice. Congratulations.
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- Nummymuffin - 05/09/2011
- Congrats!
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- AnimeNewsRadio101 - 05/09/2011
- 2 word's : cool color
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- Reoccurring - 05/09/2011
- For all those who have never won, keep at it! I have submitted I think 3 avatars before? And I surely didn't think I'd win anything with this one. So always submit your avatars, If you think it is beautiful, I am sure someone else out there will too! Thank you everyone and best of luck to you all!
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- Reoccurring - 05/09/2011
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Thanks for the comments/critiques guys! Yes I agree the golds at the top seem a bit duller, but I didn't have much to work with, When I make my avatars I literally scour all of tektek's database, so I challenge you to find an item that fits cause I sure couldn't =(
And perhaps it is a bit top heavy, but I feel the entire contour of the avatar is pretty abstract, I don't particularly like 'balanced' avatars, they feel flat to me, no matter how spectacular the colors may be.
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- Blackdragon0228 - 05/09/2011
- I really like the top half. the bottom half is incomplete 2 me. its not terrible or anything. its pretty cute but not really a 3rd place to me. if it was just a little more done it could b really good. still congrats!
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- Pikachew - 05/09/2011
- There is dull gold for the top half of your avatar and bright gold for the bottom half. It feels like matching 101 with a guardian theme, but at least you found a way to make the laurels not look obnoxious and out of place, though, I would have gone with the non-sparkly pose.
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