- by Amara Hayada |
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- | Submitted on 03/29/2010 |
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- Title: Yearning Moon
- Artist: Amara Hayada
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Description:
They all denied her. The stars, the sun, the planets and comets. They pushed her away, refusing the friendship she desperately needed. They thought her aloof with her cold, silver hair and empty pale face. They never try to see past the silver exterior and see the warmth within.
The moon hangs silently, aching for some semblance of friendship, pushed away. She is cursed with loneliness, to forever dance alone under the silver trees as the warm Universe around her watches her, refuses her. - Date: 03/29/2010
- Tags: broken moon silver tree lonely
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Comments (6 Comments)
- -The Fire Priestess- - 04/11/2010
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Pretty, but a bit cluttered. :' |
The color scheme is off. Each white is a different shade; it pretty much shows how rich you are.
And as many have said, the dress makes the entire avatar uneven. There are plenty of white dresses in gaia. I think the teal and pink are unnecessary.
3/5. - Report As Spam
- Amara Hayada - 04/10/2010
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Continued...anyway, to future 'raters', please feel free to post criticism on how I can improve my avatar. I appreciate all criticism so long as it is clean and polite. So please, don't just rate, tell me WHY you rated it. The people who rate without saying anything, it's because of you that I usually avoid posting things here.
Thank to all who commented. - Report As Spam
- Amara Hayada - 04/10/2010
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@the Ominous Cold One-I tried REALLY hard to find a dress that fits the theme, trust me, there aren't many out there. This was the best I could find, but if you think there are better, please, name me some. I've tried out a prom dress, may go a bit better, but I'll wait and see.
Aside from that, thank you everyone for the comments. I normally hate posting stuff in the arenas because usually you get no commentary and just ratings. (will be continued in second post due to stupid 500 chara crap) - Report As Spam
- Ominous Reloaded - 04/10/2010
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The dress really ruins it for me D:
The rest is pretty though...
3/5 - Report As Spam
- KnittingNepeta - 04/07/2010
- I love it
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- DeLoessian - 04/06/2010
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Beautiful.. love the description and how the pastel colors of the dress stand out. Well done! 5/5
Mind rating back? =3 Comment appreciated.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=102068051#title - Report As Spam
