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- | Submitted on 01/16/2010 |
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- Title: Lone Centaur
- Artist: Marrioneette
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Description:
My skin is pure white, so is my hair,
Hidden behind my face is my white tears.
I have four legs and a tail,
But not a trace of color, I am so pale.
My Glowing amulet is my only friend,
Because all have met their end.
I am alone with out my mentor,
But simply I am just a Centaur.
- Date: 01/16/2010
- Tags: white horse
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Foxiimaru - 01/27/2010
- it's beautiful biggrin
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- Marrioneette - 01/25/2010
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Aryeec, yeh they are I couldn't think off a better way of ending it.
Slide Hammer,iStrawberry and Waves-of-Vangogh thank you!
Tenshi No Kisoku, I'll work on it smile - Report As Spam
- Aryeec - 01/24/2010
- The last two lines of the poem are cheesy, but the Avi is very solid. 5/5
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- Slide Hammer - 01/24/2010
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A cute poem, and a pretty avatar! 5/5
Rate back if you care to. - Report As Spam
- Tenshi No Kisoku - 01/24/2010
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looks like a blob of white to me D:
i would either throw in another color to create some contrast, or make it so you can see the difference between the different items for some texture or something - Report As Spam
- Forgetful Ichigo - 01/22/2010
- wow! lovely poem and avi. ^^
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- The Wabbit - 01/22/2010
- Yes, the poem is wonderful, and full of immortal magic. 10/5
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