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  • Title: The Old Doll
  • Artist: HoshikoKei
  • Description:
    Do you remember
    that old doll?
    The one you used to take to bed
    when you were a child?
    The one you tucked away
    with your bunny rabbit
    your old kite
    your children's books
    when you said
    "I'm too old for this now."
    Her yarn hair is dusty now
    her dress is spattered with grime
    her sewn-up skin is tattered, torn
    and her button eyes glimmer dully
    from beneath ashen cobwebs.

    (Sorry, I'm not much of a poet ^^; Constructive criticism is appreciated <3)
  • Date: 11/27/2009
  • Tags: doll childhood toys children
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Alkaizer87 - 12/02/2009
  • Very original I saw the title and the avi I'm like," eoe that really does look old." Then I saw the description and made me think of Chocolate, a medium sized brown teddy bear Ihad when I was like 6. I used to hug it and go to sleep. Even now I can't go to sleep right away unless I hug something. I misss Chocolate. 20/5
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