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- Title: The Forgotten Princess
- Artist: Heaven_Leigh_Treasure
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Description:
She stands stock-still,
Amidst the wintry forest.
Her staff held aloft in hope,
To guide her lover’s return.
She waits, she weeps
The tears fall thick and fast
For a day and a time
When things were different.
The nights slip by, a fog sets in
The horizon does not yield.
(This is my first attempt at the arenas, as I had neither the gold nor the time to put together an accompanying text. Any feedback is greatly appreciated)
- Date: 07/05/2009
- Tags: forgotten princess misery
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Dances With Scissors - 07/12/2009
- unlike a lot of the entries, this one has it together~ very good :}
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- Heaven_Leigh_Treasure - 07/12/2009
- Thankyou everyone for the comments and feedback smile At least I know what I need to improve on.
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- minapuppy - 07/11/2009
- Like everything but the torso area...it's too busy. 4/5
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- gabby-san - 07/10/2009
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very good
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5/5
rate baq?
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=101522241
please and thnk you
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- leo the fallen one - 07/10/2009
- u asked and i did the favor u asked me to i did as i was told
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- SumomoSoCute - 07/10/2009
- not bad, I dont like the halo bit, but it does break up the black a bit.
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- Eclairl - 07/10/2009
- awesome avi and thanks for rating and leaving me a nice comment ^^
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