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- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: Crystal Kyuketsuki
- Artist: QueensCrystalGuard
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Description:
Okay so I just wanted to submit my avatar, see how it does, ya know? I want advice on how to make it better, what to add, what to take off, etc.
Also, Black & Red, one of my favourite colour combos, don't diss it, k? =/ - Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: crystal kyuketsuki vampire demon dark
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Deadly C l i c h e - 12/08/2008
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Nothing against black and red. But you should've used a different hair style.
It looks cluttered because of the. The horns are too much and maybe you should take off the horns and the Elemental WIngs.
The skirt under the dresss gives a nice effect.
Maybe you should use the Alruna rose differently. For example just the boots.
And take off the headband.
Sorry but only 2/5 - Report As Spam
- ssJprachi - 12/08/2008
- coooooooool avi luv it
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- TheCardifflassy - 12/08/2008
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I think the head band is a bit much, she has red eyes and then the red head band might be a bit to much on the head? Also I didnt notice the skull till I really looked and it seems a bit weird with a horn sticking out of it.
Also I think you should be gratefull of comments you recieve deleting them seems a bit bitchy, people take time to comment and appreciate.
Also unless your a english teacher don't correct peoples spelling and grammer it is not very nice. - Report As Spam
- iiFuzzyBlueLights - 12/08/2008
- change the hair and take off the skirt thats underneath the dress and it would look awesome. 5/5
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- QueensCrystalGuard - 12/08/2008
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Second note: Comments of "OMG THIS IS OVERUSED" will also be deleted.
I said advice, NOT spam.
(Seems I can't edit my entry at all) - Report As Spam