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- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: Crystal Kyuketsuki
- Artist: QueensCrystalGuard
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Description:
Okay so I just wanted to submit my avatar, see how it does, ya know? I want advice on how to make it better, what to add, what to take off, etc.
Also, Black & Red, one of my favourite colour combos, don't diss it, k? =/ - Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: crystal kyuketsuki vampire demon dark
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The Living Rose Of Death - 12/08/2008
- i really like it. look up Eleven witch of the forest and vote on it please!
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- QueensCrystalGuard - 12/08/2008
- Indifferent about comments. For the time being though I shall now go to bed since it's 5 AM...
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- Naught But A Mule - 12/08/2008
- Try going for reds that match, so it doesn't look so cluttered. Loose the moon, tatoo, and headband. And the skull, it's just kind of pointless there. And the elemental wings don't match that well either, so loose that as well. Other than that, 1/5
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- SitiSifir - 12/08/2008
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ee...creepy but i like it..
erm...rate me back in arena...both house and avi... " house of thousand light" " frosty u want some?"... - Report As Spam
- xX-iGummehLicious-Xx - 12/08/2008
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Bleh. 1/5
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- Xeno Incognito - 12/08/2008
- To go on: Deleting comments is petty and childish. When you put your avatar up, you're showing it to the public for their opinion. If your avatar is all about YOUR personal style, then don't enter it in a competition and expect to have praise the entire time. If you can't take it, here's some advice: DON'T ENTER YOUR AVATAR IN A PUBLIC ARENA WHERE IT WILL BE CRITIQUED.
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- Xeno Incognito - 12/08/2008
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Oh, so you want a REAL critique?
First and foremost you avatar is a cluttered piece of junk. Your skin is unbalanced. Your legs are completely covered yet your face is mostly bare. The shades don't even match. The moon is unneeded and barely fits the theme. Vampires don't have black wings, last time I checked. It also seems redundant considering you already HAVE wings in the front. The skirt doesn't match a thing. Why is there even a dark circle there? Vampires aren't demons! - Report As Spam
