- by Marion-san |
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- | Submitted on 09/14/2008 |
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- Title: Happily Ever After?
- Artist: Marion-san
- Description: My name is Marion. I grew up in a little city, working for scraps, living paycheck to paycheck best as my family could. One day, a local entrepenuer hosted a party. I made a dress, cleaned up, and off I went. Orin, the entrepenuer's son, was dancing with all the young women. He danced with me, and walked away. So, it wasn't a "love-at-first-sight" thing. We dated, much to his father's disagreement, and eventually he proposed and we are to married. So what do you think of my wedding dress?
- Date: 09/14/2008
- Tags: happy cinderella princess prince wedding
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Thistleigh - 09/19/2008
- cute! I love a good 'happily ever after...'
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- Bunny_likes_2_play - 09/18/2008
- I love the idea behind the character but i would recommend loosing the moth and instead replacing it with the biancamellia i think it would then be perfect with that. so i give 4/5 because your story did seem very rushed in the end.
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- Eevee Evolves - 09/18/2008
- Simplistic but the avatar goes along nicely and looks nice
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- ll Ritsuka Neko ll - 09/18/2008
- too plain but good
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- cyghdkjhtg - 09/18/2008
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It looks okay but the story needs more.. you have a nice start.. then you just drop it and slap on a very dry ending. =/ Work on it?
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3 for the look 2 for the story... = 2/5 Not bad.. - Report As Spam
- MoonFlames13 - 09/18/2008
- still thinking...
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- VidaValentine - 09/18/2008
- Pretty the description is a little dry but I like the Avi.
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