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  • Title: White Bird
  • Artist: sen-sazionale
  • Description: It's A Beautiful Day
    It's A Beautiful Day
    White Bird
    White bird,
    in a golden cage,
    on a winter's day,
    in the rain.
    White bird,
    in a golden cage,
    The leaves blow,
    Across the long black road.
    To the darkened skies,
    in its rage
    But the white bird just sits in her cage,
    White bird must fly
    Or she will die

    Thanks for all the comments and votes! Constructive criticism please.
  • Date: 12/26/2008
  • Tags: white bird
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • charlotte_loves - 01/03/2009
  • Well,I'm not a critical person ^^ there will be no need to be a critic anyway,Well.. The eyes. they need to be changed. maybe to drome? Everything esle is lovely 4/5
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