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Santa claus, brings happiness and joy,
he brings laughter and also toys,
the jingling bells, on his slay,
jingle softly in there peaceful way.
So remember Santa, as a friend,
you never know what he will send. biggrin
- Title: santa
- Artist: Yumi 1856
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- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: santa
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Comments (3 Comments)
- firey_angel020 - 04/19/2009
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I think this is a cute poem.
and there is no right way to rhyme a poem. there are many different ways. i will agree though that it is a little boring. you just need a little something more in my opinion, but as long as you are satisfied by it, that's what matters. - Report As Spam
- Scary Kidz - 03/29/2009
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umm its really short, and its sorta boring. i mean, if you put a lil more about santas history i would ttly love it. and it also rhymes WAY to much for a short poem.
and when rhyme its supposed to go
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every other suppost to rhyme smile - Report As Spam
- RoronoaDamian - 02/13/2009
- ca drecu de naspa smile
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