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I dreamt I was in a place filled with love,
Peace and harmony flew like a dove,
None was tainted, all seemed to sing,
But, like I said, 'twas only a dream.
I dreamt of loneliness and despair in my heart,
Of demons and pain that ripped me apart.
When all was tortured, I let out a sream,
But thankfully, 'twas only a dream.
I dreamt of a place, where my mind only knew,
Where knowledge was kept, senses askew.
In this place, madness was king,
I wonder, 'twas it only a dream?
I dreamt of a time, where you were with me,
Things we would do, God I felt free,
Oh, my heart itself spread wings!
But, alas, 'twas only a dream.
I dreamt of a world, where my heart was pure,
Where my mind and my soul were no long ubscure,
Where your eyes met mine, and our love was a stream,
My eyes now open: 'twas no longer a dream.
- by infernox10 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Dream
- Artist: infernox10
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Description:
I was not sure if "Holiday Poetry Contest" meant poems about the holidays, or a poem contest during the holidays.
I submitted one based on the latter, and decided to make one more...
Holiday-ish, I would say.
More of a loving-poem, one with heart and emotion,
Which undoubtedly blossoms in the winter days.
Enjoy. - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: dream
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Fyre Lupos - 03/18/2009
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WOW! that is some good stuff there! have you ever thought about being a pro poem writer? CAUSE I THINK YOU SHOULD CAUSE THAT IS A VERY GOOD POEM!!! 5 STARS FROM ME! =D
my fave part was this bit:
I dreamt of a world, where my heart was pure,
Where my mind and my soul were no long ubscure,
Where your eyes met mine, and our love was a stream,
My eyes now open: 'twas no longer a dream. - Report As Spam
- babyl0_ove - 02/21/2009
- its not holiday but that was beautiful
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- Princess Pachabel - 12/20/2008
- FREAKING AMAZING, TAYLOR! AS ALWAYS! I reeeaaaally like it!
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