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My last breathe
Be4 i die tonight i wanted to tell you something be4 its to late.
My last breathe would be these very few words.
I love you with all my heart!
Merry Christmas!
- by ii-Jessibear |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: My Last Breathe
- Artist: ii-Jessibear
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- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: last breathe
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Lonely Spark Plug - 03/25/2010
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There are somethings wrong with this poem.
First. It's "before", not "be4".
Second. Didn't interest me. Too boring, I mean.
Third. Proper punctuation would be nice.
Well, I give it a 1/5. - Report As Spam
- please pass the butter - 11/26/2009
- If you're going to submit a poem, at least make sure it's written correctly. :/ 1/5
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- evilcelebi - 01/22/2009
- i don't mean to be rude i think its boring but i'll give u a 1/5
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