-
CHRISTMAS
The christmas eve is coming soon,
Like the snow is falling in full bloom.
Looking out of window now,
A land of snow,
So wonderful.
Should be happy,
Should be fancied,
Everyone is having it,
This feeling full of joy and happiness ,
That is only on in christmas eves.
That is what I want to say,
Be happy, smile to this nice days.
Christmas is something very important,
So take the gift of christmas all the year,
In your warm heart for sure!
- by Magic Diamond Angel |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
- Skip
- Title: The gift of christmas
- Artist: Magic Diamond Angel
- Description: The gift of christmas.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas
- Report Post
Comments (5 Comments)
- Amras Tasatir - 06/13/2011
- Ignore the people talking about form. Poetry should reflect the poets personal style.
- Report As Spam
- Atomic Rock - 08/03/2009
- I agree with Ryu. I couldn't really find anything linking it together, but for the most part it was a good poem with a happy sentiment.
- Report As Spam
- Rainbows Reign - 07/06/2009
- It was okay. There was no form, but good concept. I wasn't sure what you were trying to do...limerick? Haiku? Freeform? I like poems with structure to them, and, well, that didn't. But it was pretty cute. So, you did okay.
- Report As Spam
- dawningbeauty - 01/04/2009
- that was a really cute poem with a good message. nice job
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
