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do you hear the bells question
the bells of stanta's sleigh
do you see the preasents question
the preasents stanta put their today
do you see your family together question
which this day your family needs to stay
to see this beautiful day as christmas falls away
christmas is coming
and now it's here better enjoy it now
cause it's not coming back till next year
- by marisa1996 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: christmas is here and away
- Artist: marisa1996
- Description: about how christmas is coming and that it is here and it's going to leave
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: christmasishereandaway
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Comments (5 Comments)
- lagreentractor - 06/12/2009
- you need to make the lastline more connected to the rest, but the poem was good.
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- Mikanis Hatter - 05/27/2009
- It's good, but you need to spell check (ie. presents)
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- Pwincess Hideki - 12/16/2008
- I like this poem :3
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- rimedragona - 12/16/2008
- It's good at the beginning, but then it starts to fall apart at the end. I like it, though.
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- marisa1996 - 12/07/2008
- does this poem bore you? i'm sorry not much of a writer but good in it
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