- Title: Silvia
- Artist: 0Shawn0
- Description: Um... form what I remember she's related in the story with Saito. Feed back in comments down there pwease? :3 (and yes I know there is two different painted techniques *facepalm*)
- Date: 12/22/2011
- Tags: silvia blue dress casual
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Comments (6 Comments)
- 0Shawn0 - 12/26/2011
- >_> last part sounded kinda' weird but I can now see clearly watcha' mean! That's helpful! Thank you! C:
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- GianellaBaby - 12/26/2011
- Okay, if you wanted me to be more specific, very well. One example is her shoulders are too rounded and her neck to wide (and a little long) for a female. Another thing, her arms are too short for her body. The elbow should be ab out mid-body so remember that. Maybe you should try drawing a person without the clothes so you could see the body and how it could be fixed.
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- 0Shawn0 - 12/23/2011
- aye, I just want it a little more helpful, I was very grumpy from other stuff yesterday and apoligise for being a little too angsty about it. v.v
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- TokkiBear - 12/23/2011
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I agree with Shigahiro. 2/5
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- 0Shawn0 - 12/22/2011
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Oh I see, I understand now! I'll get it right next time! ;D
(grumpy waiting for feed back and getting VERY vague criticism that doesn't really help at ALL or get to any point of which needs improvement...) - Report As Spam
- GianellaBaby - 12/22/2011
- Work on anatomy.
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