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  • Sleeping Girl
  • Title: Sleeping Girl
  • Artist: xXCyan StarzXx
  • Description: Ok,so this was my first drawing using a tablet and corel paint essentials 4. It's not the best in the world,but I'm trying.Can anyone give me tips and pointers on how to improve?I'm taking any [u]CONSTRUCTIVE criticism[/u] you have to offer.
  • Date: 12/26/2010
  • Tags: sleeping girl
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Comments (2 Comments)
  • Karusa Kurayami - 01/01/2011
  • the eyelashes need to be defined as if every single one holds the key to everything in the world. try and soften the face a little. the nose should be a light shade of pink and the rest of the face slightly darker. the lips are a little bit looking like she's kissing someone. think about the contrast between light and dark a little and you could make it chiaroscuro.
  • x Purky x - 12/30/2010
  • Well, first of all, the hair. It.. It needs more lines in it, yknow? And it needs a few longer strands sticking out over the face. No ones hair is perfect. And the nose is too pink and the lips are too small. You need the hair on the other side to show because they look like a boy besides the lips, like let a little show just laying off to the side, because no one sleeps standing up and her hair would probably spread out. Lips are much too small, eye brows are too short, but 4/5.
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