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  • Title: Delicious cake.
  • Artist: Koneli
  • Description: Hello!
    This is a gift for my friend, Pudding Disaster--it's her birthday today :3

    Actually, I'm interested in both comments and critiques, so feel free to do either.

    Small part of the picture was cut off since the original is TOO large XD;;;
  • Date: 05/27/2010
  • Tags: delicious cake
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Comments (1 Comments)
  • Katsumi Sakurai - 01/14/2012
  • Very cute! I really like it I hope your friend does to!! 5/5.
    To critique I would have to say that some of the proportions are off a bit. Her leg looks to far out from the rest of her body and should be brought closer to the other leg. Also the face seems to be a bit to large on one cheek but that makes it cute. The last thing I see is that her arms are to small. They should be wider and just a little bit longer.
    Still I think it's really cute! Awesome 18th b-day gift!!
 
 
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