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  • Day Dreamer
  • Title: Day Dreamer
  • Artist: xXDead-Before-It-BeganXx
  • Description: she is the girl who stares out the window in class constantly spaces out wit her mind filled wit her strange dreams
  • Date: 01/05/2010
  • Tags: dreamer
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • PornCake - 01/09/2010
  • Wow I like it a lot....But I can not draw at all ._. ....But from someone who cant I will give it 5/5 :3
  • -max-15-dream- - 01/07/2010
  • good try, i like it. the face needs a bit of work, and the angle of her bodt, especially her arm, need some work. other than that, good job!!!! biggrin 3starz!!
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 01/06/2010
  • -continued-
    Just thicken the wrinkle line and expose the highlights and line of each individual hair line. Also, maybe it's time to work on you shading. Try to make your shadows and core shadows darker and your highlights lighter. 3/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 01/06/2010
  • Yes! Yes! You fixed the mistakes of the face! Awesome! >w<
    I am proud. biggrin Unfortunatly, you repeated the same mistake but made it worse going from the neck down. The chest and shoulders look too squished in. (Or the arm is too big). And like what a_tied_wrist said, you can't do that with the arm. When a person is making that kind of a pose, the arm will be vertical line. Also, expose your hair lines for the hair and the wrinkles being pushed upon the face by the hand more clearly.
 
 
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