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  • my first anime face...
  • Title: my first anime face...
  • Artist: Xxdeath_of a_loved onexX
  • Description: this is just the face not the head or hair i am only working on one thing ata time i just wanted to put this up to see what people thought of the eyes nose and mouth...
    please tell me if i need improvements O.O
    it took me a little while to get the eyes right but i think i got it =
  • Date: 12/24/2008
  • Tags: first anime face
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • sk8terboy939 - 02/02/2009
  • good very good excellant in fact but i think you are more suited to the A5 pencil with grip-rolling so you dont make such sharp turns when you are shaping the eyes but the eyes i have to admit myself, are really good except for one thing the pupil colors are shaky and distoriented at least in my eyes and the nose, too subtle. the mouth could be better, i mean, you could have shaded it in a little more but otherwise good.
  • Tori_dreams - 01/10/2009
  • You did a wonderful job on the eyes. the nose needs to be slightly rounded on the end. Keep up the great work. smile
  • The Art Wench - 12/26/2008
  • That's not at all how you should start. I used to start like that too, but I learned how to preportion the face by making the kind of face I wanted first before adding in the details. Starting with the eyes, nose, and mouth makes the drawing dispreportionate. The eyes are amazing though. Keep up the good work, and just try drawing the head shape first then mark where the eyes, nose, and mouth will be. Draw the hair line or bangs to sort of draw the eyes around it. Please keep up the good work!
  • Hi im Riven - 12/25/2008
  • nose should be a bit higher and a little more to the right, just because of its position. other than that, your doing okay. biggrin 5/5
    and please rate and comment on my work too. blaugh
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