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  • Title: Spring of Mine
  • Artist: Chaza
  • Description: just something I had in mind. I didn't have a good pencil to work with, so it became like this.
  • Date: 04/21/2004
  • Tags: othersoriginal
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Nevaliah - 12/02/2009
  • It's not spectacular, but it's a good start for realism.

    The lips are a bit flat, and very cartoonish looking.
    As for her nose, there isn't much definition there, and she's seems to be missing a nose hole.
    Next time, I would suggest looking in a mirror and studying the way your lips, nose, eyes, and hair look. It'll help out a lot.
  • soul_reap229 - 11/20/2008
  • try and talk about exactly what you like about the
    picture; is it the hair? the eyes? the
    background?

    if you are critiquing, start with
    something you like about the picture, then mention
    specifically what you don't like. (eg. the hair is
    too long, eyes are too big).
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