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  • Title: April
  • Artist: Mattation4ever
  • Description: this is another one of my pictures please give advice.
  • Date: 11/30/2008
  • Tags: april
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • kc135 Airman - 01/20/2009
  • A wonderful drawing every thing from the eyes up is fine what you could work on is the proportion of everything else, thin out the jaw a little and neck alot. the shoulder a little more broad. I love the detail u worked it it look like u did this in pen that can be very hard! Great Work!!
  • furareta_doshiyo - 11/30/2008
  • i think u shud just work on everything from the nose down
    change the shape of the face a bit
    make the neck look...not as manly maybe make it skinnier
    and when u draw the nose it isnt usually like that unless the character is facing the side just a bit...hope this helps u improve >.<
    its a pretty good pic tho^-^
  • Hero Valios - 11/30/2008
  • It looks like you're off to the same start I had. The biggest and best piece of advice I can give is to start the head with a guide.You'll have to figure out what works best for you over time. I can guess that you started with the eyes and worked your way outwards on this one, but doing that leads to odd proportions (as I'm sure you're finding out.) Keep trying!
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