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  • Title: re:Balthier
  • Artist: Regal Reprobation
  • Description: Ok, so this time around, I tried darkening everything while still trying to retain the original look. Please tell me what you think.
  • Date: 11/14/2008
  • Tags: rebalthier balthier final fantasy twelve
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Harmonious Dischord - 04/20/2009
  • Okay, here's the critique. Don't mean to be mean though:
    The head becomes too much of an upside down triangle. I mean, I know that's how heads look, but it's too much here. Also, the hand is too tiny and stiff. It seems out of place. 4/5 but only for effort. I can tell you'd be good, you just have to look out for details.
  • Duchess of Tamponville - 03/02/2009
  • Sorry i put that in so many posts, it was too long for the stupid 500 characters or less! Overall though, it is very good. You seem like a talented artist. Keep trying and you will become very very good!

    Also, this was posted a bit back, so who knows, maybe you got better already!

    Thanks, hope this doesn't seem rude. That wasn't intended if it does...
  • Duchess of Tamponville - 03/02/2009
  • Eyebrows might need to be thickened just a tiny bit, but i do realize Balthier does have kind of small eyebrows, but not that thin. His hair isn't so slicked back...but it's not bad. Hand needs to be a bit bigger too...I also don't like how his head is quite big at the top as it should be rounding off...it seems more like a square at the top left side. Maybe the ears should be bigger too?!
  • Duchess of Tamponville - 03/02/2009
  • For me, the eyes are to small. The lips area seems a little bit off, it could just be me but it almost seems like a platypus because it kind of looks like it almost sticks out.
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