- by Regal Reprobation |
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- | Submitted on 11/14/2008 |
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- Title: re:Balthier
- Artist: Regal Reprobation
- Description: Ok, so this time around, I tried darkening everything while still trying to retain the original look. Please tell me what you think.
- Date: 11/14/2008
- Tags: rebalthier balthier final fantasy twelve
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Harmonious Dischord - 04/20/2009
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Okay, here's the critique. Don't mean to be mean though:
The head becomes too much of an upside down triangle. I mean, I know that's how heads look, but it's too much here. Also, the hand is too tiny and stiff. It seems out of place. 4/5 but only for effort. I can tell you'd be good, you just have to look out for details. - Report As Spam
- Duchess of Tamponville - 03/02/2009
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Sorry i put that in so many posts, it was too long for the stupid 500 characters or less! Overall though, it is very good. You seem like a talented artist. Keep trying and you will become very very good!
Also, this was posted a bit back, so who knows, maybe you got better already!
Thanks, hope this doesn't seem rude. That wasn't intended if it does... - Report As Spam
- Duchess of Tamponville - 03/02/2009
- Eyebrows might need to be thickened just a tiny bit, but i do realize Balthier does have kind of small eyebrows, but not that thin. His hair isn't so slicked back...but it's not bad. Hand needs to be a bit bigger too...I also don't like how his head is quite big at the top as it should be rounding off...it seems more like a square at the top left side. Maybe the ears should be bigger too?!
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- Duchess of Tamponville - 03/02/2009
- For me, the eyes are to small. The lips area seems a little bit off, it could just be me but it almost seems like a platypus because it kind of looks like it almost sticks out.
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- ryrdyurdtyd - 11/15/2008
- Pretty good!!!! 10/10
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- Unblemished Smile - 11/15/2008
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I'm not sure what it is, but the forehead and eyes look wrong.
the pupils might be a bit too dialated or too small - Report As Spam
- Sweet Rainbow_Sora - 11/14/2008
- it looks awesome xD
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