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  • Azixel vs Nemine
  • Title: Azixel vs Nemine
  • Artist: Azixel
  • Description: Azixel (Nobody)
    And Nemine (heartless,Nemine means No one) My kh oc's. Ready to fight.
    The dialogs:
    Azixel: No way...you died...
    Nemine: Yeah...like you will die now.
    you can see it on da: http://flamingkhheart.deviantart.com/art/aziVSheartless-fake-screencap-144861233
  • Date: 05/15/2010
  • Tags: kingdom hearts manga anime azixel
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • Sailing12 - 06/04/2010
  • im laiks anime as regards the picture I don't have reservations but too short dialogue and therefore 3...
  • Rin seragaki - 05/28/2010
  • I understood the dialogue it's pretty cool with the characters ^_^ Great work. Especially on the red head :p
  • Samefag - 05/23/2010
  • Dialog is pretty bad. 4/5

    In the second panel you could go with something more careless like: "Not as dead as you think..." or something like that.

    And in the first something that would go with her face, she looks like she's raging a bit so you could try something like: "You should be dead!!!"

    Just giving my input, hope it helps.
  • riseark - 05/16/2010
  • cool, but maybe the words could go in a dialogue box? took a bit for me to see the word 'like' in Nemines hair ^^"
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