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- | Submitted on 06/25/2009 |
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- Title: Song of Morning- Ch1 Pg3
- Artist: fluffysgirl7413
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Description:
And now the third page of Ch1 in the comic Song Of Morning.
Comment with constructive criticism and without flames would be nice.
Tell me what you like and what you dont like, what could look better how, etc.
Thanks.
If you like this art and want to make a request of your own that you want drawn. Let me know and maybe we can discuss it over. - Date: 06/25/2009
- Tags: song morning chapter page comic
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Comments (2 Comments)
- By-Tor-Snow-Dog - 06/30/2009
- I like the panel set-up and your inking and perspective are fantastic. The panel where she's yawning looks a little funny, maybe its because her hair ends a little too closely and it cuts off her head a little bit on the top corner. The action line for her smacking the alarm clock is a little confusing as well, its a little too smooth. But otherwise honestly a grade A comic 4/5
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- Mangaville - 06/26/2009
- Heheh. That's pretty funny.
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