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- | Submitted on 04/12/2009 |
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- Title: Kumori Tenma
- Artist: Nyar Naoko
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Description:
I hope you like it
It's my first comic it's supposed to be serious
I hope to make my own little story if I have any fans...
if not I'll just make them for me and my friends
please leave constructive criticism. - Date: 04/12/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Nyar Naoko - 05/12/2009
- sorry to say the next pages aren't going to be out for a bit because of school and also I'm trying to improve my drawings.
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- roboslacker - 05/10/2009
- It seems like a decent introduction of a character, but I would have preferred seeing a montage of Kumori Tenma's past as an actual warrior of heaven and how he became of demon of the shadows. I would probably stick to standard size panels. Also maybe a little more detail of the background if you are going to use a giant splash panel. I look forward to reading more.
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- CardCaptor_dearS_meow - 05/06/2009
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for your first comic i think its good
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- Ursa Jr - 04/26/2009
- kinda ugly -.-
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- Nyar Naoko - 04/23/2009
- your monster sounds awesome I'd love to see it ^^
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- Ollieysius - 04/22/2009
- DUDE. that looks like my monster. c: it sorta does but not really o.o mine has one eye and four legs. c: 5/5
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- Homicidal Bunny102 - 04/17/2009
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nvm! I can see it now, and now I love it
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