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  • Good Guy Vs. Bad Guy in Dream
  • Title: Good Guy Vs. Bad Guy in Dream
  • Artist: halo91_91_
  • Description: i was thinking of making a new comic so here is the title^.^=
  • Date: 12/27/2008
  • Tags: good dream
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Balnibarbi - 12/31/2008
  • The girl's eyes are a little off, making her head look a tad wonky. But I like the composition, and I love the way you shaded the glasses.
  • swingwell - 12/31/2008
  • it looks incomplete. the measurment of the eyes and the forehead are a tad odd and the girl's face needs to be fixed, along with the body, but the legs look good. sorry but i study art, can't help it.
  • Hi im Riven - 12/27/2008
  • great shading. the males look really detailed, so is the girl, but her face shape is off a little. anyways, I'd still give you a 5/5 because of the penicl-like shading.
    (hooray for pencils)
  • Jecx_Sato - 12/27/2008
  • other than those minor indiscreprancys, it looks great! the body proportions are perfect and personally I like that (head isn't too big) I also like the person to the right. I hope you take my comment to heart and continue to draw

    (my comment was too long for just one ;P)
  • Jecx_Sato - 12/27/2008
  • Great! love the shading and the whole set-up. a few things bother me though.... on the right side there is.....nothing. that's probably what you where going for (considering the left is black) but I suggest that you put some sort of design, something simple so that there isn't this overpowering white "glare". also the girl in the middle... her eyes are a tad off (A little far spaced).
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