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  • Page 13 -- Oh, no...
  • Title: Page 13 -- Oh, no...
  • Artist: Kabocha-chan
  • Description: Yeah, there's nothing I'm submitting here before or after this, so don't worry about context!

    No text because:
    1. It's too small at this size (web size is at 780px height)
    2. It looks fine this way.

    Created in Deleter ComicWorks.
  • Date: 12/21/2008
  • Tags: kibou manga
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Golden Teaspoon - 03/15/2009
  • Just an honest critique,
    if you'd like this to appear more
    'manga like' I would try having a more
    diverse sizing of people, most of your people
    are the same size, kinda threw me off, but I do
    really like this! Great job! Keep working hard on this!
  • 2shy83 - 02/12/2009
  • I have no idea what this is about however I am smart enoug hto know that if this whole segment is on one page alone than it's not your wonderful art throwing it off, but the way the author *if it's yours good job anyway* paged it.. would've have been better spread out instead of all slumped together in one. ~ very dramatic though *A Grade* err.. minus the frame that looks a little more *rated*?
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