I just made another post about basically the same things I would tell you, in another thread.
Here's what I
had to say about that.
The only things I would probably add, statement wise, are that you should probably leave Kamon to the Side Board, since the only thing you'll really ever hit will be Call of the Haunted, and it's just such a gamble to run one for one card like that.
Also, the Threatenings and the Scrolls are really unnecessary. Scrolls is just such a BAD card.
gonk
Rose is slow, since she needs a Normal Summon, which is why I suggested Plaguespreader Zombie in the other thread, just to give you a little insight. You can still Normal Summon it into a Zanji, revive it, and Synchro with Goyo to Level Eight. Or just use Enishi, who is also a LIGHT for Avenging Knight Parshath and Light End Dragon, for the sake of versatility.