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okay so im working on a new flob and right now im stuck... i dont know what to do with the dress or how it should fold around the body or anything DX

so maybe could you guys save a copy and redline it and pm it to me pretty please
it would be much help to me

and critiques are much welcomed too
but please dont be to negitive

this is no where near finished and i noticed it looks really washed out so i need to fix that as well
but any help or input would be great ^^





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I'd say the head is a little too big? Sorry, I would redline it but my tablet is elsewhere...
I agree the colours are a little washed out, but they compliment each other well. Maybe just use some darker shading or outlines to define the shapes better?
I love it though 3nodding
     


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A quickie redline. I just want to post it here because others can learn from it.

It seems to me you gave absolutely no thought to the structure of the body beneath the hair or the clothing, which is why the picture looks so flat and my redline is basically a redrawing.

A good practice is to try and get into the position you're drawing. Tilt your head onto your left shoulder and then try lifting your right. It kinda hurts doesn't it? Whenever you tilt your head in one direction the opposite shoulder with automatically lower.
 
     
 
     
 
 
 
 




very true manga ^^
thank you very much and its true my anatomy sucks o.o that
its something im still working on 3nodding

Thank you very much for the pointers
it helps alot



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i don't see how anyone could even red line this...

there's like, NO value whatsoever...i can barely make out the different parts of the body.
     

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http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/3289/meedit1sm.jpg
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DX its that bad...
i knew it was bad anatomy wise but still you didnt have to be so harsh T.T



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DX its that bad...
i knew it was bad anatomy wise but still you didnt have to be so harsh T.T



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hun, he's just saying that it is hard to see and define parts of the body because there is no shading and such. It is too bright. And I agree you need to add some darker shades there so we can see it better. At least add some lines or something is what I'm trying to get at. It's a cute pose though, from what I can see...
     
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i agree its washed out
thats another reason i stoped working on it because i wanted to get the pose and everything down first before i continued




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