Redliners please

[Kasia]

I'd say the head is a little too big? Sorry, I would redline it but my tablet is elsewhere...
I agree the colours are a little washed out, but they compliment each other well. Maybe just use some darker shading or outlines to define the shapes better?
I love it though 3nodding

[Manga Punk Sai]

A quickie redline. I just want to post it here because others can learn from it.

It seems to me you gave absolutely no thought to the structure of the body beneath the hair or the clothing, which is why the picture looks so flat and my redline is basically a redrawing.

A good practice is to try and get into the position you're drawing. Tilt your head onto your left shoulder and then try lifting your right. It kinda hurts doesn't it? Whenever you tilt your head in one direction the opposite shoulder with automatically lower.

[[-Schatz-]]

i don't see how anyone could even red line this...

there's like, NO value whatsoever...i can barely make out the different parts of the body.

[virus spectator]

Melody of Amaya

DX its that bad...
i knew it was bad anatomy wise but still you didnt have to be so harsh T.T

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hun, he's just saying that it is hard to see and define parts of the body because there is no shading and such. It is too bright. And I agree you need to add some darker shades there so we can see it better. At least add some lines or something is what I'm trying to get at. It's a cute pose though, from what I can see...