Sunset

• Artist: kittycat_nya
• Description: This is another short poem that I made and it is about finding beauty in the end of the day.
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: sunset endings

Splashes of lemon
A tidal wave of orange
All together in a whirlpool of red
Silouhettes dance
Against the flaming sea
And find the beauty
In the end

Comments

[DiNoS_gO_rWaR]

u need to express wuts inside more and make them longer and u need to find urself in a poem all i found was beauty within lemons and oranges and flaming seas add more deatail

[xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx]

so- so