- Title: PAGE03 DARK SHINING BLADE EP01
- Artist: regna91
- Description: NEXT IS DSB0104
- Date: 07/16/2009
- Tags: dsb0103
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Comments (7 Comments)
- lll Dev lll - 08/08/2009
- Very good.... but your grammar killed it.
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- Foxxy Rawr - 07/26/2009
- *and not ans, my bad ^^;
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- Foxxy Rawr - 07/26/2009
- to mitsuki: I unstand your frustration I to am big on grammar ans such but ever stop to think he was putting emphasis on how this character talked? Lots of writer's do that, as well as I. anyways love the art 5/5
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- mitsuki95351 - 07/24/2009
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"are you crazy?
so... you really from other world"
corrections;
so... (you're/ you ARE) really from another world?
"thats's mean, you got spells or divine powers right?"
corrections:
that means you know spells or have divine powers, right?
keep up the good work
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- Reyzak - 07/22/2009
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@@ my frendz!!
its "for" or "from"?
and robert..what do you mean the chars not to good? - Report As Spam
- robertvilla1 - 07/17/2009
- good background but the chars not too good pm me i want to talk
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